Book Three Chapter 13, 2nd Draft

Ready for another chapter? Here it is! The second draft of chapter 13 of Dragon’s Fall: Book Three is ready for your critique. I’m looking for the good, the bad, and the ugly. Let me know what I did right, let me know what I did wrong, and let me know where I can improve. […]

Book Three Chapter 12, 2nd draft

The 2nd draft of chapter 12 of Dragon’s Fall: Book Three is ready for your feedback. Help me make this sci-fi story better by pointing out any story issues, slow parts, confusing parts, and/or sentences that could be worded better. I greatly appreciate you! 12Mission Prep Ten flinty-eyed senshi stood in an impenetrable line. Their […]

Book Three Chapter 11, 2nd Draft

Sorry I haven’t posted in a while. I wanted to reread through Book Three before I posted it, and I’ve been so busy writing that I haven’t had a chance until recently. This draft of chapter 11 in Dragon’s Fall is now ready for review. Read it and let me know what you think. Any […]


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