Book Three Chapter 13, 2nd Draft

Ready for another chapter? Here it is! The second draft of chapter 13 of Dragon’s Fall: Book Three is ready for your critique. I’m looking for the good, the bad, and the ugly. Let me know what I did right, let me know what I did wrong, and let me know where I can improve. […]

Book Three Chapter 12, 2nd draft

The 2nd draft of chapter 12 of Dragon’s Fall: Book Three is ready for your feedback. Help me make this sci-fi story better by pointing out any story issues, slow parts, confusing parts, and/or sentences that could be worded better. I greatly appreciate you! 12Mission Prep Ten flinty-eyed senshi stood in an impenetrable line. Their […]

Book Three Chapter 11, 2nd Draft

Sorry I haven’t posted in a while. I wanted to reread through Book Three before I posted it, and I’ve been so busy writing that I haven’t had a chance until recently. This draft of chapter 11 in Dragon’s Fall is now ready for review. Read it and let me know what you think. Any […]

Book Three Chapter 10, 2nd Draft

Ready to read chapter 10 of Dragon’s Fall: Book Three? This chapter gives you a glimpse into the cyborgs’ motivations, but it needs improvements. It’s only the second draft, after all. As you read this, consider which parts could be fixed or changed. Hell, you can even tell me which parts are great! Feel free […]


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