2 comments on “The Kavakian Empire – Part One Chapter 2

  1. So.. the security detail didn’t take Jori’s weapon before allowing him on the ship? I can respect the doctors jumping into action to care for his unconscious brother, but I would have expected security to force him to choose between going with his brother and his weapon as soon as he was teleported up.

    This does definitely grab my interest. It’s got a good investigative and tense vibe that makes me wonder what’s going on and what’s going to happen next.

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