One comment on “The Kavakian Empire – Part One Chapter 4

  1. I feel like this conversation went a little too well… maybe a little more tension and suspension from both? I know J.T. is operating in good faith because Jori hasn’t attacked any of them yet, but doesn’t Jori come from an aggressive warrior race? And I know Jori isn’t going to do anything to jeopardize his brother’s life or healing, but if I were him I wouldn’t be terribly trustful right now. Still enjoying the story though!

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