2 comments on “The Kavakian Empire – Part One Chapter 5

  1. /This/ conversation was much more fulfilling in the tension and suspicion department. I really hope the Captain speaks with his superiors before making any further moves on his own, and I’m interested to see how Jori and J.T. interact with each other when they’re alone.

    • When imagining this setting, I imagined it a bit like Star Trek where the captain has a lot more leeway to make his own decisions. But, introducing the admiral’s opposition earlier into the story is something I have considered.

      Thank you so much for reading and adding your input, Whitney! I’ve been hoping to get some good feedback.

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