2 comments on “The Kavakian Empire – Part Two Emperor Ch1a

  1. I LOVED this chapter! Given what we’ve talked about regarding dialogue and description, I’ve got a feeling you’ve worked this chapter over a couple of times, and it shows. There’s a certain nostalgic value to seeing J.T. after reading the ending of Part 1, and you did an excellent job with describing the battle, the onslaught of Tredons and the reason for the confrontation.

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