One comment on “The Kavakian Empire Part One Chapter 7 – Revised

  1. I like this insight into Calloway – his entitlement and his quick temper are readily apparent, and if he’s still as defiant as he was in the first draft, this chapter really helps to set the stage for when he causes real trouble. Love it! ❤

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