One comment on “The Kavakian Empire – Part One Chapter 13

  1. The first thing that jumped out at me in this chapter was a feeling of dread. And it wasn’t Jori’s; it was mine. It was like a hammer I hadn’t known was waiting to fall just had, and the resulting devastation was that much worse because there hadn’t been any anticipation of it. Honestly I think this is my favorite chapter so far.

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