4 comments on “The Kavakian Empire – Part One Chapter 15

    • I was hoping the word would speak for itself. I’ve heard that readers get bored when the writer educates them on all the futuristic terminology. I’ll have to think on this more.

      • I mean, I get the general idea. But I’m picturing a cellphone. Maybe even one sentence about its broad capabilities, so that every time thereafter it’s mentioned, your readers will know in what ways it might be being used.

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