2 comments on “The Kavakian Empire – Part One Chapter 20a

  1. Wouldn’t Jori exclaiming “Terk!” have woken J.T. up, especially if they were sleeping close enough that Jori could see J.T. was still asleep at a glance?

    • I suppose it depends on how heavy a sleeper he is. Perhaps when I work on J.T.’s character more, I can mention something like how well he’s been sleeping lately now that he isn’t worried Jori is going to kill him.

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