4 comments on “The Kavakian Empire Part One Chapter 5 – Revised

  1. Jori sighed audibly. “I don’t play games, Commander.” – This made me giggle, I could just picture Jori rolling his eyes in exasperation.

    The game between the two was nicely done. It flowed well and even someone like me who doesn’t have a head for strategy followed along well, and I love the ominous ending. ❤

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